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Friday, August 13, 2021

burmuda trench

Auckland 1653 flight 72, I am headed to Miami time 20:42.

I was so excited to go to Miami. It was my first time going to Miami.

But, I was also a little bit scared and nervous because it was my first time.

Okay, we just took off. I'm really scared right now.

I saw these really dark clouds. We had to go through the clouds and then that's when I started to feel very dizzy and funny.

Then I saw another big dark stormy cloud.

Then we went through the time field, and when we came out and we appeared in Miami. Phelf that was a close one.


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1 comment:

  1. Mr GoldAugust 26, 2021 at 11:29 AM

    Hey James, well done on this piece of writing. I like how it flows because of all the punctuation that you have added. If I were on this plane I would be feeling pretty dizzy too. Keep up the great work.

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